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Creepstale the novel: Chapter 1-Part 1: 8th fallen

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Long time ago, four races ruled the earth:
HUMANS, ANGELS, MONSTERS and DEMONS.

One day, the war between good and evil
to be able to take over the earth

After a long and legendary battle,
the humans and angels were
victorious.

They sealed the monsters and demons
from underground with a magic spell.

Many years have passed since the war...

MT. Silver
202X

A creepypasta say that those who enter
the God's mouth Cave never return.

CREEPSTALE: The novel
Chapter 1: No end ruins

[Protagonist wakes up after five weeks dead, also she lost
all her memories, she proceeds down hallway to right, entering
the door into meeting GREENY]

(Greeny)
Hi there.
Name's GREENY.
GREENY the GREEN DOLL.

Hmmm...

You are now in the UNDERGROUND, isn't it?

You look's confused!

Someone ought to teach you how things works arround here!

I guess i'm gonna start with a little thing

Are you ready?
Let's do it!

[Battle]
(Greeny)
Did you see that lil' heart?

That's your SOUL, the culmination of your being!

It starts very weak, but can be strong when you got so much LV

What is LV?
Simple

Is LEVEL or LOVE

Wanna have LOVE?

No worries!
I'll share some one

Down here, LOVE is spread through...

Those...
"Friendliness toy knifes"

You ready?

Move your SOUL!
Catch 'em as you can!

[Dodge for first time]
Not bad, lil' girl.

Let's try again.

[Dodge for second time]
Heh, you... you're very hardest to touch those dangerous knifes...
i mean, "Toy knifes" and...

One last try.

[Dodge for thirth time]
You know what!?

You found the hardest one!

[GREENY circles protagonist a ring of knifes]

SAYONARA!!!

[Touched the knifes]
Idiot girl...

In this world you KILLS of they will KILLED you!

You know what i'm thinking!?

[GREENY circles protagonist a ring of knifes]

Watching you diying!

SAYONARA!!!

[GREENY begins laughing as knifes begin close into the protagonist.
after the contact with the knifes. GREENY gets knocked away by a
explosive gift. PINKIE PIE slides in right side to the center of the screen]

(Pinkie Pie)
I'm sorry to be spoilsport in your party

It was not appropriate to deserve this

Hey, a new friend...
Sorry, I'm very excited to meet the new human in this underground

Anyways, im PINKIE PIE.

Hey you have a scar on your head

Will it be because of your fall?

...

What!?

The big blow in your head, made you lose your memory?

Do not worry, I'm sure you'll get your memory back.

You don't remember your name?

Well, you'd better stop doing what you were doing.

[Exit battle]
(Pinkie Pie)
Alright, follow me.

[PINKIE PIE exits, protagonist follows close behind her. Enter SAVE POINT 1]

[Protagonist saves]SAVE POINT: A girl without memory, meets a friendly pony ...
She can trust her?
Her adventure begins with a great determination

SAVE POINT: HP Fully restored(if protagonist chose to touch toy knifes)

SAVE?
Save/Return
FILE SAVED
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NOTE: I need some Sprite makers for this AU, i'm not very good making battler or overworld sprites, you can talk to me about the personalities of the characters in my Universe, also, i need some conpect artists too.
[Update 1]
If anyone are Undertale AU song composer, check out this art:
ernesto666.deviantart.com/art/…
Also, if you already compose a song of my AU, check out my Soundcloud(Im not a composer, but i upload some songs to find so easly in the page):
soundcloud.com/user-411024330

My Undertale AU group
:iconcreepstale:
Creepstale by :iconernesto666:
Undertale by Toby Fox
Sally williams by :iconla-mishi-mish:
Green doll by :iconflamme2:
MLP by Hasbro
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Flamme2's avatar
Awesome! Green Doll is just portrayed perfectly here! She really fits in. You really did good on her personnality ^w^ if you need additionnal infos on her, don't hesitate to ask :)
(This AU is good!)